It was dark…
The wind blew up the curtain. Lights from the street crept in. He could see her standing by the window staring outside…
Her hair, gently blown by the wind. Tears trickling down her chin …
It was killing him, to stand there and watch her cry…
He knew, she deserved better than him…
Song I'm Listening: - Hinder – better than me…
22 comments:
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A good one :)
So little words can mean so much ..
And that song by hinder is really awesome ...
Okay. I am going to listen to that one
@ life is illusion - I did...lol
@Charmed one - thanks for taking time and listening to the tack :-)
@Shilpa - thanks..:-)
Short one but nicely expressed with a cute pic.
m gonna hear to that song and 'm sure its gonna be ma fav for long :-)
short and simple but lot of emotions, nice one :)
@suresh- thanks bro...:-)
@pappu- thats an excellent song, you would love it...
@moi- Thanks...:-)
Short poem but so very meaningful..and very touching...the last line was simply amazing!
good post
aha!! finally made my way to your blog after all the twists and turns and detours...ApocalypsE!
neat blog you got yourself here mate!
...yeah, talking of such Rock bands, i kindda do agree with Hinder. they are the new Nickleback types. but i do miss me Creed.
cheers! :)
very interestig. love the song quotes.
@Nachi- Thanks bro... I welcome your comments WITH ARMS WIDE OPEN...:-)
@Desert Rat- Thanks for the comment...
The last line was full of emotion. Gosh, thats a hard decision to come to.
Nice one.
good one! and that pic is awesome
Nice one!I like Hinder,they make good music :)
thanks ppl :-)
nice one :)
Hi, thanks for inviting me to this great blog. Nice post mate..First I thought like those were ur words from ur heart.. :)
and the twist in the post at last..
Nicely composed.
btw, I have added u in my blog list mate.
AD...those are my words... My first attempt at 55 fiction [ fictional story with 55 words]... I was inspired by that song...:-)
Simple yet powerful. I like it.
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