Friday, March 20, 2009

MIRROR OF THOUGHTS


The girl who haunts 

My days and dreams

I see her every day

A smile from the corner of her lips

Could take my breath away


I never told her the way I felt

In her presence my heart just melts

Guess I was a little too late

She was in love 

With someone else


I wasn’t jealous, I wasn’t sad

There’s nothing more that I wanted

Than to see her smile

He dint realize what he had

Was stupid enough to make her cry


I wanted to be the one to hold her face

Be the one to catch her tears

No matter how hard I try

I’ll never be able to tell her

Coz I’m just another wardrobe mirror…


20 comments:

velusamy said...

"A smile from the corner of her lipsCould take my breath away"
"In her presence my heart just melts"
"I wanted to be the one to hold her face
Be the one to catch her tears"

these lines are too good.. :)

and untill the end i thought you were just another guy who didnt have the guts to tell her...

Fine piece of poetry.. :)

Suresh Kumar said...

Nice piece of poetry. And a great ending.

Hmm..... now whose wardrobe mirror you would love to be ? :)

Nikhil said...

Dude I must say ur fantastic with the end............ethnic and authentic.

Karthik said...

Now here's an awesome piece of work. No criticism this time, none at all... just too good man.

I wonder what inspired it though....

ApocalypsE said...

@Velu thanks man

@Suresh thanks...:) I really wanna yell her name now... But I cant...:(

ApocalypsE said...

@Nikhil thanks dude

@Karthik everyone has their inspirations, it could be anything... Just have to open your mind and see...and think a lil freakishly:)

Vinnie said...

hehehhehehee...quite unexpected!!
red bull gives such 'highs' too :)

Chriz said...

sooooper... hope my wardrobe mirror also sings songs like this for me

Chriz said...

climax of the poem was top class

moi said...

Hey well written, i was laughing at the last line. mirror wardrobe!!

hitch writer said...

well written....

really well written...

brought a smile to the face dude.. !! :)

ApocalypsE said...

thanks a lot ppl...:)

workhard said...

Yeah, i liked the ending too.. Nice poem



Read poems

Chantel said...

This is wonderful, and sad. I feel sad for the girl, because she will never know...

Chriz said...

yes the picture was from meet the spartans only.. but couldnot help but adding it cos the gilma was soooper.. :p

Jagjit said...

Oh! Beautiful. Love it... Very well written man. KIU.
cheers.

~*wILd chILd*~ said...

Beautiful poetry. very creative.

Karthik said...

[:(][:(] Sentimenta pesitaan da maapu!!!

//I’ll never be able to tell her

Coz I’m just another wardrobe mirror…//


Nee sirippum podhu, un arugil naan illai endru therindhu manasu valikudhu



aanal un alugaikai thodaikka naan illai endru theriyum podhu manasu innum valikudhu



Aalwarpetta ApocalypsE

arivuraiya keludaa

ore kaadhal ooril illaiyada


Thanks fr dropping ma blog and following it!!

ApocalypsE said...

thank you people...

@karthik its about a mirror, it got nothing to with me... I dont even have a mirror... I dont wanna scare myself every morning you know...:)

Karthik said...

I misinterpreted "You are a mirror" Sorry.. Am weak n poems!!