The girl who haunts
My days and dreams
I see her every day
A smile from the corner of her lips
Could take my breath away
I never told her the way I felt
In her presence my heart just melts
Guess I was a little too late
She was in love
With someone else
I wasn’t jealous, I wasn’t sad
There’s nothing more that I wanted
Than to see her smile
He dint realize what he had
Was stupid enough to make her cry
I wanted to be the one to hold her face
Be the one to catch her tears
No matter how hard I try
I’ll never be able to tell her
Coz I’m just another wardrobe mirror…
19 comments:
Nice piece of poetry. And a great ending.
Hmm..... now whose wardrobe mirror you would love to be ? :)
Dude I must say ur fantastic with the end............ethnic and authentic.
Now here's an awesome piece of work. No criticism this time, none at all... just too good man.
I wonder what inspired it though....
@Velu thanks man
@Suresh thanks...:) I really wanna yell her name now... But I cant...:(
@Nikhil thanks dude
@Karthik everyone has their inspirations, it could be anything... Just have to open your mind and see...and think a lil freakishly:)
hehehhehehee...quite unexpected!!
red bull gives such 'highs' too :)
sooooper... hope my wardrobe mirror also sings songs like this for me
climax of the poem was top class
Hey well written, i was laughing at the last line. mirror wardrobe!!
well written....
really well written...
brought a smile to the face dude.. !! :)
thanks a lot ppl...:)
Yeah, i liked the ending too.. Nice poem
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This is wonderful, and sad. I feel sad for the girl, because she will never know...
yes the picture was from meet the spartans only.. but couldnot help but adding it cos the gilma was soooper.. :p
Oh! Beautiful. Love it... Very well written man. KIU.
cheers.
Beautiful poetry. very creative.
[:(][:(] Sentimenta pesitaan da maapu!!!
//I’ll never be able to tell her
Coz I’m just another wardrobe mirror…//
Nee sirippum podhu, un arugil naan illai endru therindhu manasu valikudhu
aanal un alugaikai thodaikka naan illai endru theriyum podhu manasu innum valikudhu
Aalwarpetta ApocalypsE
arivuraiya keludaa
ore kaadhal ooril illaiyada
Thanks fr dropping ma blog and following it!!
thank you people...
@karthik its about a mirror, it got nothing to with me... I dont even have a mirror... I dont wanna scare myself every morning you know...:)
I misinterpreted "You are a mirror" Sorry.. Am weak n poems!!
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