Thursday, February 5, 2009

Nothing Lasts Forever


It was dark…


The wind blew up the curtain. Lights from the street crept in. He could see her standing by the window staring outside…


Her hair, gently blown by the wind. Tears trickling down her chin …


It was killing him, to stand there and watch her cry…


He knew, she deserved better than him…


Song I'm Listening: - Hinder – better than me…

24 comments:

life is an illusion said...

dude check out my blog...lol

Charmed One! said...

A good one :)
So little words can mean so much ..

And that song by hinder is really awesome ...

Shilpa said...

Okay. I am going to listen to that one

ApocalypsE said...

@ life is illusion - I did...lol

@Charmed one - thanks for taking time and listening to the tack :-)

@Shilpa - thanks..:-)

Suresh Kumar said...

Short one but nicely expressed with a cute pic.

pappu said...

m gonna hear to that song and 'm sure its gonna be ma fav for long :-)

moi said...

short and simple but lot of emotions, nice one :)

ApocalypsE said...

@suresh- thanks bro...:-)

@pappu- thats an excellent song, you would love it...

@moi- Thanks...:-)

velusamy said...

Good song.. now i know how songs can inspire people to write a 55 fiction.. Good post dude:)

nishaa said...

Short poem but so very meaningful..and very touching...the last line was simply amazing!

thiru said...

good post

Rajesh said...
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Nachi said...

aha!! finally made my way to your blog after all the twists and turns and detours...ApocalypsE!

neat blog you got yourself here mate!

...yeah, talking of such Rock bands, i kindda do agree with Hinder. they are the new Nickleback types. but i do miss me Creed.

cheers! :)

Desert Rat said...

very interestig. love the song quotes.

ApocalypsE said...

@Nachi- Thanks bro... I welcome your comments WITH ARMS WIDE OPEN...:-)

@Desert Rat- Thanks for the comment...

SSQuo said...

The last line was full of emotion. Gosh, thats a hard decision to come to.

Nice one.

Princess Katrina said...

nice lyrics

Raghav said...

good one! and that pic is awesome

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Nice one!I like Hinder,they make good music :)

ApocalypsE said...

thanks ppl :-)

OnCloud9 said...

nice one :)

AD said...

Hi, thanks for inviting me to this great blog. Nice post mate..First I thought like those were ur words from ur heart.. :)
and the twist in the post at last..
Nicely composed.

btw, I have added u in my blog list mate.

ApocalypsE said...

AD...those are my words... My first attempt at 55 fiction [ fictional story with 55 words]... I was inspired by that song...:-)

Chantel said...

Simple yet powerful. I like it.